tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5031436877036455179.post568510443870806415..comments2022-09-23T23:19:57.171-04:00Comments on DirkFlix: Cyberspace Open 2010 Results - Judging The JudgeDirk Belligerenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03389773359984582477noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5031436877036455179.post-9374802463130983212010-05-28T16:10:19.061-04:002010-05-28T16:10:19.061-04:00Whoops, I posted too soon. More:
I understand whe...Whoops, I posted too soon. More:<br /><br />I understand where you're coming from, as it does seem the reader was asking you for what everybody says to avoid: exposition.<br /><br />Perhaps the reader thought there was a better way to reveal the underlying plot at this moment without resorting to exposition? If the scenes aren't supposed to be condensed movies (I'm really worried about my round 2 entry after hearing that), one must expect enough information to put character's motivations and dialog in context, since the other 105 pages of your script aren't included with your entry.<br /><br />Just a thought. Thanks for sharing your scene: it was cool to see another entrant's, um, entry. ;)Carlos Farohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08431572035011642907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5031436877036455179.post-10684776313769494742010-05-28T15:57:26.360-04:002010-05-28T15:57:26.360-04:00I made it to round 2 with a score of 93, but now I...I made it to round 2 with a score of 93, but now I'm worried. My round 2 entry might be classified as "a movie condensed to a scene." Eep.Carlos Farohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08431572035011642907noreply@blogger.com